The Source

[esaul]

Personal::

Name- Will

Age- 16

Forms of contact apart from PM- Already well known

RPing experience- Over two years now

How often will you be able to come on?- as much as possible


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Charrie info::

Name- The Source

Appearance- He has a half tattooed face and wears black robes. At one time he wore red robe with a red hood but then wore black robes and black hood.

Personality- The only thing the Source cares about is either keeping his powers and rule over the underworld, or the killing of the Charmed Ones and their line.

History- For at least five hundred years the Source kept his reign over the underworld. The only major conflict he ever had during that time was when the Charmed Ones appeared. Each attempt to kill them was futile until one of his assassins succeeded in the killing of the oldest sister, Prue. It turned out their was another Charmed sister, the Charmed Ones still lived.

RPing example ((Don't use any powers!!))-

The war for who remained the Source still went on. The current Source could not stand it any longer. Zankou, the one he had reincarnated betrayed him. And Belthazor too, the best demon he had ever known was trying to get his powers as well. What else was he to do? He could not continue on keeping his attention on the Charmed Ones as well as the two that were trying to dethrone him. Also he had to make sure that Iris never finds out about what he was keeping hidden from her. A spell would have to do. But what spell? The Grimoire might have something in it that could help him. He sat on his throne thinking deeply unsure of what to do next. A plan had to be formed.

[Axelia Moore]

I'm sorry but you need to fix three things in your application before I can accept you:

1.) You're personality is a bit short I'd like you to add on to it. No one's as simple as that.

2.)The History only goes to where Prue died, it should be added on to where we are now. It should be about three paragraphs to be a full History especially for the Source. And not trying to favor my char or anything but you might wanna add something about Axelia since she is his queen.

3.) I can see you've read the plot from the RP example but you need to the read the first chap which shows advancement into the plot and mentions that Iris and Axelia have already met each other.
charmedxlives.proboards47.com/index.cgi?board=chapters&action=display&thread=1166150861&page=1

As soon as you fix those three things you'll be accepted.

[esaul]

1.) There isn't much to go on with a personality for the Source since it is quite obvious.

2.) How am I suppose to add stuff with Axelia when it is your character and I apparently can't make things up for your own character.

3.) They may have met but how does the Source know that? It doesn't specifically say the Source knows about it.

[Axelia Moore]

1.) Like I said nobody is that simple. You could say stuff like he's selfish, stubborn, power greedy, etc. etc. It may be obvious but I'd like you to include it.

2.)Ok I'll rephrase that. Atleast mention Axelia was queen when you got resurrected by Artemis, Melinda, and Chase. And the problem still stands that you only have the history up to where Prue died, please add on to it.

3.)It doesn't specifically say that he doesn't know that either. By your RP it doesn't seem you read the first chapter, sorry.

Please don't argue with me because I can assure I'm not going to change my mind.

[Richela Zenith]

Will i'm with Richela here. Instead of arguing with two of the Main Admins can you just change it without a big fight please? Make things simple for us....

[phoebehalliwell]

I agree too, you could do much better on that form...


- posting from my Phoebe account, can't be bothered to change into admin account at the mo' -

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